Dark Forebodings - Page 6-7 / A webcomic

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Panel Walkthrough

The Making Of

Script

PAGE 6-7

DOUBLE SPREAD PANEL

He walks home, unsettled by the visions of all the murders that appear as ghostly apparitions on the street. He sees murders from all times: cave men, Indians killing settlers, Spanish conquistadores killing Indians, a sheriff being shot in a duel, a wild dog killing a child, 30’s Al Capone style criminals in a feud with a rival gang.

All these ghosts are transparent, the actual people on the street are real and substantial, unaware of what the P.I. is seeing.

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Thing is, if you see murder and mutilation everyday, you start to believe that’s all the world is made of.

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My gift paved the path to my own private hell: nothing but stiffs and gore and guts.

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Everywhere I go, all I hear are the screams and death rattles of the dying.

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All I see is dismemberment and slow, painful deaths.

Layouts

My notes to the artist:

Great shot! To the right side he have to be very meticulous with the details and general environment (buildings, windows, homes, departments, etc)

It can be a great panel, but i think the sketch needs more refinement, more work in the poses and characters in foreground.

Roughs

Pencils

Colors

Letters for the Comic Book Version

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

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