Dark Forebodings - Page 21 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

PAGE 21

Panel 1

The P.I. looks at a crystal wine glass on the kitchen counter.

P.I.

Yeah, I can see it now.

FLASHBACKS STARTS AND CONTINUES UNTIL END INDICATED

Panel 2

Dolores Parker feeds her man wine, while having kinky sex with him. He is tied up to the bed with a collar and leash around his neck.

CAPTION

You mixed the poison in this glass and made him drink it.

Panel 3

She drags his drugged body through the kitchen, he is barely putting up a fight.

CAPTION

When he wouldn’t die, you dragged him into the closet and shut it.

Panel 4

Dolores Parker locks him in the closet.

CAPTION

You were worried for two reasons: one, he wasn’t dead. Two, I was in town, and could expose you with my… “gift.”

Layouts

Notes to Raffa, the artist:

Page 21 panel 4 - it would appear that D is closing the door on her husband, but in the next panel she will throw the firepoke in. So I think this panel should have an open door, she has closed it halfway, her husband is laying drugged in the shadows of the closet.

Roughs

Notes:

Page 21: Be aware with the head in panel 1. The face is too small and the head too big. Just a detail.

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

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