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Parallel Me - FREE Comic

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Story: Lorenz Lammens
Art: Brandon Page
Colors: Ross Hughes
Letters: Lorenz Lammens
Editor: Martin Silva
Chief Editor: Lorenz Lammens
Publisher: Octane Comics








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Parallel Me - FREE Comic Reviewed by Unknown on 12:57 PM Rating: 5

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19 comments:

  1. Brian RussellDecember 12, 2014 at 11:46 PM

    Creepy and intriguing!

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  2. wackyHairDecember 13, 2014 at 2:40 PM

    I like it!

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  3. ReverendDrMrDecember 13, 2014 at 2:59 PM

    Very well done. Did you do it all yourself?

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  4. Forthewolf_xDecember 13, 2014 at 3:07 PM

    What a twist!!!

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    1. Lorenz LammensDecember 13, 2014 at 3:43 PM

      Thanks. That's the theme of the first six stories of the anthology: to create a story with a surprising reveal.

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  5. kaisermaneuverDecember 13, 2014 at 3:12 PM

    i loved it, a fresh way to handle multiverse when is the next issue coming out?

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    1. Lorenz LammensDecember 13, 2014 at 3:44 PM

      Thanks! Next issue is coming out in 2 weeks, and will be published as a webcomic with each page we finish.

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  6. wotajerkDecember 13, 2014 at 3:15 PM

    Someone was inspired by VHS virals 2nd vid, parallel monsters

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    1. wotajerkDecember 13, 2014 at 3:47 PM

      seriously watch it man, ive never had a short movie leave such a lasting expression, defiantly a wtf is going on here type of place

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  7. Ollin1December 13, 2014 at 3:21 PM

    Looks great. I'm a sucker for alternate universe characters meeting themselves.

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  8. mappsy91December 13, 2014 at 3:23 PM

    I liked it lots :)

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    1. Lorenz LammensDecember 13, 2014 at 3:44 PM

      Thanks for the feedback. I love to hear what readers think.

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  9. connichulinDecember 13, 2014 at 3:28 PM

    Backed. Looks great.

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  10. switchfadeDecember 13, 2014 at 3:29 PM

    I love it!

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  11. savepublicdomainDecember 13, 2014 at 3:41 PM

    Like everyone else said, the art is great.
    I'm curious to who your target audience is. Because so far it seems like an adventure story that boys 8 and up would read, BUT it is a bit traumatizing to see the kid kill his double instead of just incapacitate him. It also makes it hard to root for the boy as he gets sacrificed.
    The artist does a very good job keeping the angles rotating in the conversation scenes, keeping the story visually interesting, even when they're saying exposition.
    The style looks like a mixture between Jeff Smith and Mark Bagley, which is a great style to have if you're targeting the young adult crowd. I also like the designs of the parallel universe, and the claw/transporter.
    Maybe as the story goes on, those concerns will be put to rest, but this was a positive initial reaction.

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    1. savepublicdomainDecember 13, 2014 at 3:47 PM

      In that case, the short has succeeded on all accounts.

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  12. Rogers GeorgeDecember 13, 2014 at 4:27 PM

    too short!

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  13. AnonymousDecember 13, 2014 at 8:53 PM

    cool story

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