Dark Forebodings - Page 20 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

PAGE 20

Panel 1

Stanley gasps and breathes heavily as the man before him dies, punctured in the heart by the poker.

Panel 2

Stanley looks behind him and sees a vision appearing in a muddled way. The image is not at all clear.

CAPTION

The murdering isn’t yet done for tonight.

Panel 3

He turns to the muddled image, now looks in horror at the ghost image of his own dead body that now clearly shows on the kitchen floor.

Panel 4

He looks behind him, where Dolores Parker stands grinning at him, pointing the gun at him (she lifted it from the naked man’s dead body).

WOMAN

You saved me, Mr. Gruber. In more ways than one.

Layouts

Roughs

Notes to Raffa, the artist:

Page 20 - panel 1 - I think we need a high angle perspective here. We need to setup that the man WILL BE LAYING ON THE FLOOR (so that we can put Dolores on top of him.) - so at the very least he needs to be falling to the floor or, better still, already lay on the floor.

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

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