Dark Forebodings - Page 1 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

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1934. Helicopter view in a room that is battered. Broken lights, shattered decorum surround the body of a stabbing victim. The P.I., the hero of our story, looks down on the body as he recounts what happened in the room to a police detective. The police are examining the crime scene.

NOTE: It is important that the way Stanley carries his gun is always portrayed as a shoulder holster. This does not need to be obvious, but matters later on.

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1934. Chicago. South-side.

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Murder is big business.

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At least it is for me.

P.I.

The murderer is 6 foot tall, has blond hair and blue eyes. He killed the victim with a kitchen knife, took his time about it, too.

DETECTIVE

Gee, that’s swell. I mean... you get all that from just looking at the crime scene?

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Mind: Lorenz Lammens / Body: Mariano Navarro / Soul: Ross Hughes / Crime scene investigators: Usnea and Martin / High Court: Octane Comics

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

To see samples of our PRO team at work, who takes care of all PRO submissions, click here.