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The Making Of

Script

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Panel 1

P.I.

I told you, I can see the residual “ghost” images of any murder that’s happened.

Panel 2

Shot from outside, with the murderer squatting on the roof, leaning over the open window.

P.I.

As a matter of fact, he’s on the roof right now, listening in. He’s still got the knife.

DETECTIVE (whispering)

Boys, check that out.

Panel 3

An officer uses the fire escape to get to the roof and sees the murderer fleeing (maybe we only see his foot and ankle).

OFFICER 1

He’s running for it, sir.

Panel 4

The P.I. opens the door to the flat in a calm and collected manner, while the detective follows him hurriedly, still thrown by the bizarre powers of the P.I.

P.I.

We really should be going downstairs now. You’ll be shooting him soon.

DETECTIVE

You telling me you can see the future, too?

Panel 5

They rush down the stairs.

P.I.

I can see future murders only a couple of minutes ahead. But yeah.

Layouts

Roughs

My notes to Raffa, the artist:

- The head is a little big, just downsize it a little bit and I think works better.
- The arm is strange, maybe it works better in that other pose.
- The bottom of the ladder misses a step, please add it.

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

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