Dark Forebodings - Page 3 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

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Panel 1

Detective and P.I. crossing the street

DETECTIVE

So where is he?

Panel 2

They look up to the side of a building, a fire escape leads off of it.

P.I.

Look up.

DETECTIVE

I don’t see anything.

Panel 3

Close up of the roof, chimney and fire escape (or something better if you have a better idea).

P.I. (off screen)

Ready your bean shooter, detective. He’ll appear on the 5th roof from there, at the chimney. He’ll then climb down the fire escape. That’s where you’ll take him down.

Panel 4

Close up of the roof, chimney and fire escape, the murderer appears and starts to climb down the stairs (or something else if you have a better idea).

Panel 5

The detective shoots.

Layout

Roughs

My notes to Raffa, the artist:

The P.I.'s arm in the top panel looks a bit rigid.

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

To see samples of our PRO team at work, who takes care of all PRO submissions, click here.