Dark Forebodings - Page 5 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

PAGE 5

Panel 1

Helicopter view of the two men standing around the body of the dead man. Rain begins to fall and intensifies over the next channels until it fully poors on page 6-7.

DETECTIVE 

So why didn’t *you* throw lead at him?

P.I.

That’s not how it was going to go down, detective. Besides, I’m a lousy shot.

DETECTIVE

Without these premonitions of yours, none of this would’ve happened.

P.I.

Hm...

Panel 2

DETECTIVE

Hey, how far back can you see these “replays” of murders, anyways?

P.I.

Since the beginning of time.

Panel 3

DETECTIVE

Killer-diller! I’ll be calling you about some old cases, then.

Panel 4

The P.I. lifts his hat and bids adieu.

DETECTIVE

That’s splendid. I wish I had your gift, old sport.

P.I.

Me too.

Layouts

Roughs

My notes to Raffa, the artist:

Very dramatic, good zoom effect

p1.- Great angle, but the street seems too be to big  to the right side, or is just my perception?

p2.-The right arm of the detective looks weird, and the overall perspective of the scene can be improved

p3 Great!

p4 The arm of PI looks strange, please photo reference that. It looks like it was another person arm.

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

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