Damaged Universe #0 - Page 3 / A Webcomic
The Making Of
Script by Lorenz Lammens
PAGE 3
Panel 1
The man runs off, a nurse behind him reaches her hand out to trying and stop him, but he is already long gone. To the right, the receptionist studies her screen. Something has caught her eye.
NURSE:
Hey, wait a sec. You'll need a wrist pass to gain access to...
Panel 2
The nurse turns around, grinning at the receptionist, who looks surprised at her screen.
NURSE:
Never mind. He'll be back soon enough.
RECEPTIONIST:
Hey. That's strange…
Panel 3
The receptionist looks up from her screen at the nurse.
RECEPTIONIST:
Miss Cochrane's file lists her husband as missing.
NURSE:
Weird. Maybe we should alert security…
Panel 4
The man is running up the stairs. The below thoughts are probably best portrayed in captioned boxes.
TIME TRAVELLER (thought):
I need to get into that room, but should go unnoticed.
Panel 5
He lifts his right hand in front of his face. It starts glowing. White electric sparks shoot from it, creating an X-ray effect that allows us to see the bones of his hand right through the flesh.
TIME TRAVELLER (thought):
Let’s see what object I can pull from the future to aid me this time.
TIME TRAVELLER (thought):
The future is collapsing, fading out of existence. It’s getting harder to summon new technology.
Panel 6
White globes form around his body suit that are part of some futuristic device. The white globes do not extend to his coat.
TIME TRAVELLER (thought):
Got something.
TIME TRAVELLER (thought):
God knows what it is or what it does though…
Panel 1
The man runs off, a nurse behind him reaches her hand out to trying and stop him, but he is already long gone. To the right, the receptionist studies her screen. Something has caught her eye.
NURSE:
Hey, wait a sec. You'll need a wrist pass to gain access to...
Panel 2
The nurse turns around, grinning at the receptionist, who looks surprised at her screen.
NURSE:
Never mind. He'll be back soon enough.
RECEPTIONIST:
Hey. That's strange…
Panel 3
The receptionist looks up from her screen at the nurse.
RECEPTIONIST:
Miss Cochrane's file lists her husband as missing.
NURSE:
Weird. Maybe we should alert security…
Panel 4
The man is running up the stairs. The below thoughts are probably best portrayed in captioned boxes.
TIME TRAVELLER (thought):
I need to get into that room, but should go unnoticed.
Panel 5
He lifts his right hand in front of his face. It starts glowing. White electric sparks shoot from it, creating an X-ray effect that allows us to see the bones of his hand right through the flesh.
TIME TRAVELLER (thought):
Let’s see what object I can pull from the future to aid me this time.
TIME TRAVELLER (thought):
The future is collapsing, fading out of existence. It’s getting harder to summon new technology.
Panel 6
White globes form around his body suit that are part of some futuristic device. The white globes do not extend to his coat.
TIME TRAVELLER (thought):
Got something.
TIME TRAVELLER (thought):
God knows what it is or what it does though…
Pencil Sketch by Mariano Navarro
Line Art by Mariano Navarro
Flats by Fernando Arguello
Colors by Ross Hughes
Letters by Taylor Esposito
Credits
Story: Lorenz Lammens
Art: Mariano Navarro
Flats: Fernando Arguello
Colors: Ross Hughes
Letters: Taylor Esposito
Edits: Martin Silva & Lorenz Lammens
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