Dark Forebodings - Page 13 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

PAGE 13

Panel 1

Stanley lifts himself off of the wheel, slightly battered.

P.I.

Uungh.

Panel 2

He turns to her, she is recovering.

P.I.

You okay?

WOMAN

Oh, god, we could have died!

Panel 3

Stanley opens a flask of whiskey and brings it to his lips.

P.I.

Nah, I would’ve seen that comin’, remember?

Panel 4

She flings herself at him and kisses him. He loses his whiskey bottle.

Panel 5

She rips open his shirt. 

P.I.

What ya doin’?

Panel 6

She kisses him again.

WOMAN

Stanley, this could be the last night of my life. I just want to have lived it well.

Layouts

Roughs

Notes:

Panel 5, please be aware of the guy face and gesture, he must be surprised right? It's important to achieve that in the pencilled pages.

For the kiss panel, the same as above: please spend special attention to the gesture, a softy nice and passionate kiss, no harsh characters.

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

To see samples of our PRO team at work, who takes care of all PRO submissions, click here.