Dark Forebodings - Page 15 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

PAGE 15

Panel 1

The door to a beautiful mansion. There is a shotgun just leaning against the wall.

Panel 2

The door bursts open, the woman straddles him with her legs around his hips, he’s carrying her in, kissing her, trying not to stumble over his pants around his ankles.

Panel 3

He lowers her onto the kitchen island and fervently takes her.

Panel 4

He looks up, his face strangely contorted as he looks at something in the distance.

WOMAN

Oh Stanley, did you come again?

Panel 5

P.I.

No, visions of murder…

Layouts

Roughs

Notes:

Panel 2, I'm very sorry to change my mind about this, but this new pages let me realise that the P.I. looks rather silly entering the house with his pants down. Could we change that and have his pants on, just in this panel, then off in the next panel?

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

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