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The Making Of

Script

PAGE 16

Panel 1

He looks around (close up).

P.I.

The murder will happen any minute now.

WOMAN

Stanley, save me!

Panel 2

He pulls up his pants (that were down his ankles) as he traverses through the kitchen. (It is important for page 17 panel 4 that he never quite fully puts on his pants and buttons them. He mindlessly holds on to his pants with one hand.)

P.I.

You’re not the one dying here tonight. I guess me coming here changed that.

Panel 3

He comes near a door in the kitchen and in front of him he sees a vision of himself at that door, punctured by a fire poker by a crazy naked man with a leash and collar around his neck, storming through the ghostly version of the door that is now open, unlike the actual door.

Panel 4

He hears scratching behind that door.

CAPTION

Got to play this the right way. I don’t want to wind up being the dead guy myself...

Panel 5

He looks at the kitchen island where at the far left and he sees the ghostly image of the crazy naked man being punctured in the stomach by the fire poker.

CAPTION

Yeah, the vision changed. My assailant will be killed by the fire poker. Over there.

Layouts

Roughs

Notes:

Pants falling off sequence needs to be clear here: he never buttons his pants because he needs to hold his gun, panel 2 should have him holding a gun. Sorry. And the pants need to be visibly being pulled up but slacking a little. Also, he never puts on his shoes.

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

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