Dark Forebodings - Page 10 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

PAGE 10

Panel 1

Stanley is apprehensive and looks away from her. He turns to the window (he has opened the blinds) and lights a smoke, while she looks around, examining his office.

P.I.

Why you come looking for me?

DOLORES PARKER

Because you can solve any murder.

Panel 2

He looks out the window. She looks directly at him.

P.I.

Look toots, I ain’t no detective. I can see ghost images of murders that have happened. I can even see a murder coming minutes away. But beyond that, I ain’t got nothing for ya.

Panel 3

She looks at him and he turns to face her.

DOLORES PARKER

I believe the murder will happen tonight, at my home.

P.I.

Who would want to kill a doll like you, and why?

Panel 4

Close up of her luscious lips.

DOLORES PARKER

My husband. I don’t love him. I think it’s driving him mad.

Panel 5

Close up of her eyes, there is a cool promise in them.

DOLORES PARKER

Come to my house. Protect me. You can prevent the murder before it happens.

Panel 6

The woman looks alluringly at him.

DOLORES PARKER

I’ll pay you… anything.

Layouts

Roughs

Panel 3: I didn't think the hand worked here, so I asked for it to be removed.

Panel 5: I asked for Parker's eyes to be more straight, more sensual, less cartoonish. This will add a femme fatale characteristic to her.

Pencils

A big improvement overal.

Colors

Promotional Materials

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

To see samples of our PRO team at work, who takes care of all PRO submissions, click here.