Dark Forebodings - Page 11 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

Panel 1

They are driving in his car, a 1934 Plymouth PE Roadster. In this panel, we’re looking at them with the camera close to the windshield.

P.I.

So what kinda man’s your husband that he would wanna bump you off?

WOMAN

He is desperate, Mr. Gruber.

Panel 2

This panel needs to clearly portray the sexual tension she’s trying to generate with her smoldering look. She is relaxed, sitting back, not approaching him physically. He’s really just talking, she’s trying to plant ideas in his head.

P.I.

Why desperate?

WOMAN

Because of that look in your eyes every time you look at me. That look in every man’s eyes.

Panel 3

He is embarrassed, looking at the road in a pained way. She keeps luring him in cooly.

P.I.

Sorry, didn’t mean to…

WOMAN

It’s a compliment from some men, Mr. Gruber. Don’t you worry about it.

Panel 4

Close up of her.

WOMAN

But I don’t like that look in HIS eyes anymore.

Layouts

Roughs

Notes:

Panel 1: The width of the car seems to change in the next panels, there seems to be less space here than in the panels that follow?

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

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