Dark Forebodings - Page 12 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

PAGE 12

Tradd Moore’s Ghost Rider did some innovative panel layouts that might be useful as a reference for this page. See them here.

Panel 1

Exterior shot. Around the car an endless series of murders are taking place. The car is speeding at dangerous levels.

WOMAN

You always drive this fast?

P.I.

Yeah, I’m a lousy driver. Easily distracted. Figured a long time ago that the best thing to do was to get off the road real fast.

Panel 2

The car is crossing into the other lane at a bend. On the left there are bushes, on the right, there is a rocky wall.

WOMAN

Careful how you take that corner!

P.I.

You caught me at the end of a bottle, lady.

Panel 3

A car appears before them. The P.I.'s car is in his path, having somewhat crossed his lane.

P.I.

Christ!!

Panel 4

He jerks at the wheel frantically.

P.I. Oh sweet mother of God!

Panel 5

The car goes off road, crashes in the bushes.

Layouts

I felt maybe the last panel needed to be more interesting in some way, and asked to please give it another try.

Roughs

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

To see samples of our PRO team at work, who takes care of all PRO submissions, click here.