Dark Forebodings - Page 17 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

PAGE 17

Panel 1

He takes his gun from his shoulder holster and turns the key in the door, letting go of his pants.

CAPTION

But who’s the guy? And what’s he doin’ naked?

Panel 2

Stanley opens the door and the naked man comes rushing out, his neck collared and leashed, thrusting the poker at thin air. Stanley has moved out of his trajectory.

Panel 3

Stanley grabs the man by his shoulders.

P.I.

If I can knock him out, I won’t have to snuff him.

Panel 4

Stanley trips over his own trousers that have fallen down his legs and loses his gun.

Panel 5

The man stabs at him with the poker, Stanley rolls away.

Layouts

Roughs

Notes:

Panel 1 - the pose is okay, but the door seems to be the problem. Could you try again to achieve this effect a little better? Please also note that he never manages to button his pants because he is holding his gun.

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

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