Dark Forebodings - Page 18 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

PAGE 18

Panel 1

Stanley runs with his pants pulled up towards the kitchen island with the man with the poker still chasing him.

Panel 2

He jumps over the kitchen island as the man throws the poker at him.

Panel 3

He lands on the floor behind the kitchen island as the poker passes above him.

Panel 4

He lifts his head a little over the kitchen island, enough to see. He’s holding the fire poker.

Panel 5

Shots are fired at him, he squats down, behind the counter

Layouts

Roughs

My notes to Raffa, the artist:

Page 18 -  the pants seem to be back on, they need to be a off (and the shoes too) for the entire sequence - he'll have to kick them off somewhere.) I think panel 1 is where he steps out of 1 of the pant legs, in panel 2 we can see the pants coming off his other leg, have some fun with it.

panel 1: I think both of the characters look a bit wooden. More gestures and dynamic will help.

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

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