Dark Forebodings - Page 23 / A webcomic

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The Making Of

Script

PAGE 23

Panel 1

Camera angle from his back, still sitting on the ground, leaning on his left arm that stretches out behind him, she towers over him with the gun still pointing at him, indecisive.

CAPTION

The future. It’s changing. But I still see my own stiff.

Panel 2

Stanley Gruber’s determined face.

CAPTION

But I see something else, too. A chance for... some justice.

Panel 3

He jumps up, struggles with the woman for her gun.

Panel 4

She falls back, onto the fire poker that punctures through her under the weight of Gruber. A shot is fired.

Panel 5

A sweating Gruber grins at her in pain as he lays on top of her.

P.I.

Goodbye Dolores, it’s the best I could do.

Layouts

Notes:

Panel 1 - Love this shot - very good.

Panel 5 - make sure that the poke hasn't gone through him yet. If you look at the following panels, you will see that he sinks deeper and deeper onto the poke due to his weight. This MUST be agonizing. So the arrow of the poke must be puncturing his chest here.

Roughs

Pencils

Colors

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Credits

Script and Production: Lorenz Lammens

Art: Raffaele Ricciardi

Colors: Kote Carvajal

All artists where paid a professional rate for the production of this comic (except for poor Lorenz who did all the paying).

This WebComic is published under the Emerging umbrella, a project that seeks to find and develop new talent in the industry. The best artists participating in the Emerging project are developed until they can join one of our pro teams.

To see samples of our PRO team at work, who takes care of all PRO submissions, click here.